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Post by :Science|Fate: on Aug 12, 2008 11:09:36 GMT -5
This is a pretty solid application; however, I'd like to see you exppand the personality a bit. Try to make it at least two good paragraphs. Let me know when you've done that
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Post by ladybirdkate on Aug 12, 2008 11:41:01 GMT -5
OK I'll edit now ! Done....the last section is new.
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Post by :Science|Fate: on Aug 14, 2008 12:42:49 GMT -5
accepted
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